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Ōsiris Shizenrin
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Ryo : 1000

PostSubject: Shizenrin   Thu Nov 19, 2015 12:43 pm


"As above, so below... As within, so without..."





Clan: Shizenrin | Virgin Forest

Location: Morigakure no Sato

Clan History:
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Elements: Katon | Fire Release — Yōton | Yang Release — Taiyōton | Solar Release
Specialization: Nintaijutsu | Ninja Body Techniques — Iryō Ninjutsu | Medical Ninja Techniques

Kekkei Genkai: Taiyōton | Solar Release

Kekkei Genkai Description:  

Taiyōton:
 


  • Special Characteristics:
    Haiburiddo no Seirigaku | Hybrid Physiology:
     
    Chishiki no Ki | Tree of KNowledge:
     



Drawbacks:


  • Suiton | Water Release is the only nature transformation that can occupy the fourth and remaining slot of a character.
  • Jutsu require +1 more chakra and the user's overall persona becomes sluggish within Umigakure due to the underwater photosynthesis that their bodies undergo, this is a different method than what the clansmen are accustomed to, thus they rely more so on their mammalian features. If a clansmen IS A RESIDENT of Umigakure they may undergoes a 900 word training to bypass this defect.
  • Three Members at a time. PM Osiris Shizenrin for inquiries.


Members:


  • Osiris Shizenrin
  • -.-
  • -.-


Kekkei Genkai Jutsu: N/A


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PostSubject: Re: Shizenrin   Thu Nov 19, 2015 1:55 pm

This is very nicely done; I only have two concerns.

1. In your KKG description you have "Lastly, the viewing of this form of chakra by eyes that can see chakra becomes equivalent to staring at the sun, thus requiring the patron to look away." Everything on this site like that deals around Perception. Therefore this has to be worked into the Perception stat. Those with higher perception are going to be able to see better through something like this without it effecting them then someone lower; and it will also deal with the rank of the jutsu being used, ect. So, please refine this to reflect that stat. Also, better describe what you mean by "eyes that can see chakra": are you talking about dojutsu, ect?

2. I have absolutely no issues with you limiting this clan to 3 members. However, it'll have to be first come first serve if it's limited like this.

Otherwise, this clan app is perfect.~
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Ryo : 1000

PostSubject: Re: Shizenrin   Thu Nov 19, 2015 2:14 pm

Edited!
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PostSubject: Re: Shizenrin   Thu Nov 19, 2015 2:23 pm

APPROVED!
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