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PostSubject: Okami Item Registry   Fri Dec 18, 2015 4:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Fri Dec 18, 2015 5:02 pm

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Item: Fine Katana
Rank: B
Quantity: 1
Price: 900 Ryo each
Description: This high quality katana, comprisoned of a core of Ferrite, and an edge of martensite, this blade has both a solid core and a potent cutting edge, and is vastly superior to it's rusty comrade. The katana averages 73 cm in length, or 28.5 inches.
Appearance:


I would like to buy this~

Okay, this... is not seeming like an A rank weapon. In fact, with the components of it it's sounding like a very brittle weapon, and easily breakable.

  • fer·rite
    ˈferīt/Submit
    noun
    1.
    a ceramic compound consisting of a mixed oxide of iron and one or more other metals.


The core of your weapon is basically ceramic; essentially no stronger than glass. The moment you go and use this weapon you're going to end up shattering the core which means the rest of your weapon is essentially weak and useless.

  • mar·tens·ite
    ˈmärtnˌsīt/Submit
    nounMETALLURGY
    a hard and very brittle solid solution of carbon in iron that is the main constituent of hardened steel.


Same with your weapons edge: you're essentially picking a brittle metal which means the moment you go to cut anything it's going to chip and break and will lose its cutting power completely.

If you wish to keep it like this I'll approve it; but from the information I've gathered the blade is going to be definitely weakened.

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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Fri Dec 18, 2015 7:22 pm

Okami wrote:
Name: Ancient Shinobi Garb
Type: Armor
Rank: S
Upgrade Slots: 2/3
Affinities: Ninjutsu
Description: Okami's family is a clan that has been around since the time before the Great Wars, and this armor, found by Okami while exploring an old tomb marked with his family's crest, proves this fact. Made using methods unknown to modern smiths, using materials that boost the wearer's skill in Ninjutsu, this armor is the epitome of the skills of the ancient world. The only man who could possibly recreate this is an old smith on a small island on the outskirts of Morigakure, and even he requires materials one must kill to get. This armor is made up of chakra-infused steel breastplate, shoulders, and thigh plates with similarly-infused padded cloth robes beneath. Any weapon B-Rank or below cannot pierce this armor because of the unparalleled craftsmanship.



Enhancements:

Name: Ancient Design
Type: Item Enhancement
Description: The design of this armor is such that it increases the strength of the wearer by +3 tiers when worn. This is due to the increase in chakra flow throughout the body due to the chakra-enhanced materials, injecting chakra straight to the muscles instead of through the bloodstream.

Name: Ninjutsu Attunement
Type: Supplementary Enhancement
Description: This suit of ancient armor boosts the user's natural talent in Ninjutsu, causing all jutsu used to be increased by + 1 rank of damage to all Ninjutsu when the armor is worn.

Also this!

Armor is approved. Priced at 3,000 Ryo. I will deduct now.
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Sat Dec 19, 2015 9:43 pm

Updated and bumping with proper sword. Bladesmithing irl for the win!
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Sat Dec 19, 2015 10:10 pm

Okami wrote:
Item: Fine Katana
Rank: B
Quantity: 1
Price: 900 Ryo each
Description: This high quality katana, comprisoned of a core of soft iron, and an edge of high-carbon, tempered chakra-steel, this blade has both a flexible core and a potent cutting edge, and is vastly superior to it's rusty comrade. The katana averages 73 cm in length, or 28.5 inches.
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I would like to buy this~

Approved, ryo deducted.
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Mon Dec 21, 2015 9:03 pm

Fixed my armor~
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Mon Dec 21, 2015 9:19 pm

Okami wrote:
Name: Ancient Shinobi Garb
Type: Armor
Rank: S
Upgrade Slots: 2/3
Affinities: Ninjutsu
Description: Okami's family is a clan that has been around since the time before the Great Wars, and this armor, found by Okami while exploring an old tomb marked with his family's crest, proves this fact. Made using methods unknown to modern smiths, using materials that boost the wearer's skill in Ninjutsu, this armor is the epitome of the skills of the ancient world. The only man who could possibly recreate this is an old smith on a small island on the outskirts of Morigakure, and even he requires materials one must kill to get. This armor is made up of chakra-infused steel breastplate, shoulders, and thigh plates with similarly-infused padded cloth robes beneath. Any weapon or attack B-Rank or below cannot pierce this armor because of the unparalleled craftsmanship, and damage from A-Rank and above is reduced by 1 rank.



Enhancements:

Name: Ancient Design
Type: Item Enhancement
Description: The design of this armor is such that it increases the strength of the wearer by +3 tiers when worn. This is due to the increase in chakra flow throughout the body due to the chakra-enhanced materials, injecting chakra straight to the muscles instead of through the bloodstream.

Name: Ninjutsu Attunement
Type: Supplementary Enhancement
Description: This suit of ancient armor boosts the user's natural talent in Ninjutsu, causing all jutsu used to be increased by + 1 rank of damage to all Ninjutsu when the armor is worn.

How many attacks of A rank and how many attacks of S rank, and how many attacks of SS rank can this armor survive taking before it will break?
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Mon Dec 21, 2015 10:37 pm

Edited it to reflect that it can sustain 10 A, 5 S, and 1 SS. Each repair costs 1,000 Ryo. Is that alright?
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Tue Dec 22, 2015 7:46 am

That's a bit too high. Normally armor cannot protect against attacks higher than it at all. And it can only protect against 1-2 attacks of its own rank, and about 3-5 attacks of a rank lower than it.

Also, I realized something in my mistake in earlier modding. Boosting stats cost chakra while they're boosted. Given you're boosting stats 3 tiers you will have to pay S chakra while these stats are boosted. You cannot have a permanent stat boost.
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Tue Dec 22, 2015 5:45 pm

Got it~ Fixed!
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Wed Dec 23, 2015 12:32 am

Bump for both armor and Kusanagi. I fixed the armor, and transferred Kusanagi from Ballad. It's a bit less powerful than it is on the other site, and I did that so that I could use it.
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Wed Dec 23, 2015 10:30 am

Okami wrote:
Name: Ancient Shinobi Garb
Type: Armor
Rank: S
Upgrade Slots: 1/3
Affinities: Ninjutsu
Description: Okami's family is a clan that has been around since the time before the Great Wars, and this armor, found by Okami while exploring an old tomb marked with his family's crest, proves this fact. Made using methods unknown to modern smiths, using materials that boost the wearer's skill in Ninjutsu, this armor is the epitome of the skills of the ancient world. The only man who could possibly recreate this is an old smith on a small island on the outskirts of Morigakure, and even he requires materials one must kill to get. This armor is made up of chakra-infused steel breastplate, shoulders, and thigh plates with similarly-infused padded cloth robes beneath. Any weapon or attack B-Rank or below cannot pierce this armor because of the unparalleled craftsmanship, and damage from A-Rank and above is reduced by 1 rank. The armor can sustain 5 A-Rank and 1 S-Rank before needing repairs. Repairs cost 1,000 ryo each time. SS-Rank Jutsu will obliterate the armor upon impact, shredding it like wet paper.



Enhancements:

Name: Ninjutsu Attunement
Type: Supplementary Enhancement
Description: This suit of ancient armor boosts the user's natural talent in Ninjutsu, causing all jutsu used to be increased by + 1 rank of damage to all Ninjutsu when the armor is worn.
Armor is now reapproved. Go ahead and move it to your locker, this won't cost you anything extra since you removed the Strength buff.

Okami wrote:
Name: Kusanagi
Type: Katana
Rank: S
Upgrade Slots: 3/3
Affinities: Katon
Description: This katana, forged with chakra-enhanced ore and imbued with the bones of a mythical creature of S-Rank, is a work of art as much as it is a weapon. It was hand-forged for Okami by the master smith residing on the edge of the Land of Forests. Folded over 1,000 times, Kusanagi is truly the man's masterpiece. The katana averages 73 cm in length, or 28.5 inches.

Enhancements:

Name: Dance of the Black Swallow
Type: Elemental Enhancement
Description: Runes dance along the edge of the blade as black flames erupt. These flames are ever burning, and burn in excess of 1,500,000 Degrees Fahrenheit, causing any who touch it other than the user to sustain 4th Degree burns over the entire area that comes into contact with the flame, spreading at a rate of 1 sq. inch per post contact is sustained. The blade itself is unharmed, and the flames feed off of Okami's chakra at a rate of 40 per post.

Name: Grass Cutter
Type: Item Enhancement
Description: Kusanagi's edge was so keen that the master smith who forged it went through three separate grinding wheels to finish it. It is capable of cutting through anything of A-Rank or lower like butter, while it notches other items of S-Rank and is stopped by items of SS-Rank.

b]Name:[/b] Inferno Attunement
Type: Elemental Enhancement
Description: When drawn, the wielder of Kusanagi gains SS-Rank skill in all Katon effects. It is currently attuned to Okami, and if Okami were to die then it would have to attune to someone else. Attunement requires 1,000 words of training, and drains half of your maximum chakra, leaving a black flame tattoo across one's wrist and forearm. If the user has less than 800 chakra when attempting attunement, it will fail catastrophically and will drain all of their chakra, leaving the blade unusable for 1 IC week, or 10 posts.

Dance of the Black Swallow I just want you to be aware that you're only going to be able to do S rank damage with these flames. Real Amaterasu is SS/Legendary area. Also, what is keeping this from melting the blade? That heat is extreme even by Odyssey standards, so you need to be able to explain why it's not melting the blade to a puddle of red hot goo. In addition, how are you not harmed by this weapon yourself? At 1.5 million degrees, the radiant heat would kill you the instant you unsheathed the blade, as well as ignite the very air, burning down whatever village you were currently in.

In short: No.

Inferno Attunement This isn't going to work. You cannot be given SS ranked skills from an S rank item. Plus, we don't allow weapons/items to automatically give someone something they haven't trained. Essentially you cannot use something you don't have the specs/elements to use already.

Make the appropriate changes and then bump when you're ready for modding again.
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Wed Dec 23, 2015 5:13 pm

Bump for Kusanagi
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PostSubject: Re: Okami Item Registry   Wed Dec 23, 2015 8:21 pm

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Name: Kusanagi
Type: Katana
Rank: S
Upgrade Slots: 2/3
Affinities: Katon
Description: This katana, forged with chakra-enhanced ore and imbued with the bones of a mythical creature of S-Rank, is a work of art as much as it is a weapon. It was hand-forged for Okami by the master smith residing on the edge of the Land of Forests. Folded over 1,000 times, Kusanagi is truly the man's masterpiece. The katana averages 73 cm in length, or 28.5 inches.

Enhancements:

Name: Dance of the Black Swallow
Type: Elemental Enhancement
Description: Runes dance along the edge of the blade as black flames erupt. These flames are ever burning, and burn in excess of 3,000 Degrees Fahrenheit, causing any who touch it other than the user to sustain 3rd Degree burns over the entire area that comes into contact with the flame, spreading at a rate of 1 sq. inch per post contact is sustained. The user is unharmed due to the fact that the flames are his own superheated chakra. The blade itself is unharmed due to the dragon bone used in it's creation, and the flames feed off of Okami's chakra at a rate of 40 per post.

Name: Grass Cutter
Type: Item Enhancement
Description: Kusanagi's edge was so keen that the master smith who forged it went through three separate grinding wheels to finish it. It is capable of cutting through anything of A-Rank or lower like butter, while it notches other items of S-Rank and is stopped by items of SS-Rank.

Approved. Going to price this at 4,500 ryo due to the abilities. I'll deduct now and go ahead and move this into your locker.
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